Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Complex sentences



WALT: write sentences in lots of new ways. We had to learn how to write complex sentences.

Thursday, 21 November 2013

Room 4 work

WALT use powerful words in our story.



Androcles was very exhausted.He looked around to hide and rest.He found a cave in the rocks.He crawled into it.It was cool and dark inside the cave.It was very peaceful too.

He went to sleep.Suddenly Androcles was woken by a loud roar.It was a lion.Androcles was terrified.He was shacking with fear.

Friday, 1 November 2013

talents and skills

ghost

tsunami

There i was driving around town looking for my looking for my sister where did she go is she gone or at home.Then right in front of my eyes there is a tsunami right where i am going driving think am i going to die.fear.My heart beating as fast as a tiger.Is my friend dead?who knows.


I hope  my sister isn't dead please don't be please don't be.why is this happening now here?I need to get out of her but what if my sister is still alive.what if i can’t save her it will be all my fault for not staying and  keep looking for her. what should i do should i just go or should i stay and look for her.what should i do some one help me think.


ant there comes out my sister you're alive thought you were dead because of the tsunami.I wasn't here i just got here on a plane.did you i was going to stay there but lucky i didn't i would of died.don’t ever leave again okay.

Wednesday, 30 October 2013

two kids


one sunny day me and Naomi went to the beach but there was a old scary lady there we straight away wanted to go before she does something to us both not just one.there is that old freaky  lady again at the back of us.Lets go down this street says sake the older brother .Naomi say’s Na she might still follow us even though we are going down the street there Naomi stops my heart is pumping faster then you can ever imagine look at the back of you.